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Saturday, June 27, 2026

 

Chapter Two:

Arthur headed down towards the lower levels, walking with a proper sense of purpose. The atmosphere down there never changes, a stale mix of recycled breath and damp concrete. He kept to the edge of the moving walkway, hands shoved deep into his coat pockets, his fingers gripped tightly around the cool brass handle of his granddad’s old pocketknife.

All around him, thousands of people moved in a weird, silent glide. They weren’t actually walking; they just stood like statues on the automated tracks, eyes fixed to images within sleek digital specs resting on their noses. The lenses did all the work, replacing the miserable grey walls with bright, personal adverts, news feeds, and flashing arrows telling them exactly where to step. They were perfectly cared for, perfectly guided, and completely blank behind the eyes.

Suddenly, the whole evening commute ground to a halt. It wasn’t a mechanical failure; it was just human clumsiness. A robotic shopping trolley designed to follow one's every move had strayed, scattering pre-packed synthetic meals right across the narrow gate of the terminal.

What happened next was total paralysis. The crowd right behind didn’t think to just step around the mess. They just stood there, letting the moving track carry them forward until they were piling into each other like a flock of confused sheep. The girl, whose trolley it was, just stood over the spilt food, her hands hovering uselessly in the air, her face pale with a blank, helpless sort of panic.

Nobody bent down to help her. Nobody told the crowd to move around. They just huddled together in a tight, awkward knot.  Their specs flashed red with proximity warnings as they waited for a central maintenance drone to respond. People had completely given up their own independence to a system Arthur had spent thirty years building. They’d literally lost the basic human muscle needed to solve a problem as simple as a dropped box.

Arthur stepped off the track and stopped at the edge of the crowd. He looked at the girl's face, then at the sea of empty, vacant expressions behind her.

A wave of sickness hit him—not at the crowd, but at himself. This was the 'perfect peace' management had always promised—getting rid of the messy human variable. By making sure nobody could ever fail, they’d somehow managed to strip away the basic knack for survival.

Arthur didn’t bother waiting for the rescue drones to turn up. He turned his back on the terminal gate, walked right past the lifts that led up to his posh executive flat, and pushed open the heavy door to the emergency stairwell. It was just a cold, bare concrete shaft, completely untouched by automation, leading straight up towards the forgotten surface of the earth.


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